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Saturday, September 09, 2006

Finding Your Characters

It's not enough to write about people, minions. Oh no. I wish it were, but you see, that's what makes the difference between a mediocre story...and a good one. You have to find your characters. That is, you have to really know them, get inside their heads, understand their motives, and speak in their voice. It's tough. For me, it's the toughest part of writing a new book.

The main character in DEVON'S PLAYGROUND is Stephen (I know you thought it would be Devon, but there you go). Stephen's a good kid. He's got problems (of course...who doesn't have problems?), but he's doing his best to work past them. I like him. He's a smart kid, funny, troubled. But I'm still finding him. Unfortunately, this doesn't tend to happen for me until the second draft...and as I'm still in the first draft, it makes me quite mopey.

I wish I were one of those authors who could spin gold their first try. But oh no, not me. First I spin crap, then I spin yellow crap, then I spin gold. Grr.

So how do we find our characters? The answer seems easy--spend time with them. Thus, a big reason for the blog nothingness as of late. I'm finding Stephen (who's named after my idol, Stephen King--I know, what kind of a dork am I?). So far, it's like a sick game of hide-n-seek, where the hider is invisible and I'm the seeker. Double grr.

But enough moping. I've got to go check under the bed.

7 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Do these authors who spin gold the first draft really exist? I mean, if I could spin anything more than crap through the third draft I'd be happy. :)

Thanks for the extra minion bling. I took pictures. They're just waiting on the digi until I muster up the energy to upload them.

<3 Rach

12:17 PM  
Blogger Richelle Mead said...

Oh, I hear you on that. I'm discovering I may have to completely gut my current project. After many, many pages, I've finally gotten to know my characters, and they need to go somewhere else. Sigh.

Good luck on reaching the gold!

12:21 PM  
Blogger Heather Brewer said...

Oh, they exist. I've met them (and they were so nice I couldn't even despise them...damn them!). I'm looking forward to those pics, Rach!

Good luck to you too, Richelle! Ugh...I can totally sympathize.

2:38 PM  
Blogger Ewoh Nairb said...

OI!

I'm on the umpteenth draft and I'm still finding out more about my characters... I can't even mention what I spin on my first draft... but it is probably close to hellish ichor... and really smelly.

8:43 PM  
Blogger Heather Brewer said...

I never show anyone my first drafts--far too embarassing. The second draft is good enough for my CP, my hubby, and my loyal readers. But I make my agent wait until the third draft. :)=

9:25 PM  
Blogger Jackie said...

Me, I find my characters in the yellow pages. :)

Seriously, though, I hear you. It's taking me a while with my current WIP. Daun's a very interesting character; we're taking the time to get to know each other. Mostly, I'm listening for how he speaks, and trying to recognize what makes him tick. One of the hardest things right now is determining whether something is Daun's idea, or if an idea is given to Daun. Tough to explain -- let's just say I'm trying to figure out if it's Daun, Pan, or Jezebel who suggests they "get religion." (The next scene I have nailed. These two nuns walk into a church...)

6:48 PM  
Blogger Heather Brewer said...

Haven't tried the yellow pages yet, Jax.

But I am found of starting a scene with a bad joke. Now if only we could work in the rimshot! ;)

8:22 PM  

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